On April 9 2014, in Kandahar, Afghanistan there are lots of gun fights and revokes against the government. It is a very dirty and dangerous city where, wherever you go there are people with guns the reason is, is because there is a war going on there. Many people are living in tents because they were pushed out of there homes or else they would have been killed. Many people are glad at the government because they got them into this war. Many people try to escape to the U.S.A. but they usually get caught and are put to death, put into jail, or getting shot and killed while escaping. There were many young kids that were scared. Some kids parents had to go to the army, were killed, or just left them all by them self to be homeless. Many of these kids try to escape the war with their friends but it doesn’t really work out that well for them and this story is about a kid that is trying to escape.
The main character is a nerd who likes soccer but is not to good at it but practices every day. His name is Christian. Christian likes to eat twinkies and smuggle candy from stores but, now all the stores he smuggled candy from are gone. Christian owns a gun he owns a desert eagle. His parents gave it to him when they were caught in hiding and told him to protect him self and do not trust many people because they could end up very very bad and might kill you. He has never used the gun. Christian has always wanted to move to the U.S.A. and he has always wanted to play pro soccer. He’s not to good at it but he trains every day and gets better every day. He plays in the streets with his friends. And he wants to pursue his dream to move to U.S.A. and play pro soccer there.
One day Christian was crying in a corner because the Afghanistan army killed Christian’s parents.
Then a kid named Tant comes up to him says, “What’s wrong?”
Christian says, “The Afghanistan army killed my parents and I want to be in the USA being free and playing soccer in the USA.”
Tant says, “My parents died too and I want go to USA too.”
One day Christian was crying in a corner because the Afghanistan army killed Christian’s parents.
Then a kid named Tant comes up to him says, “What’s wrong?”
Christian says, “The Afghanistan army killed my parents and I want to be in the USA being free and playing soccer in the USA.”
Tant says, “My parents died too and I want go to USA too.”
Tant was a big and strong 12 year old who had many friends and many connections to help them to get to the USA. So Tant and Christian decide to help eachother get to the USA because Tant got the strength and connections and Christian has the smarts.
The two boys need weapons and ideas to get to the USA. So the boys start working for money by smuggling and delivering Coke to people. This guys named Darquise pays them about $100 a day and they need over $2,000 for 2 desert eagles and ammo.
Darquise knows what they are planning so he says “Need a little extra cash,”
Then both of the boys together say “YEAH,”
Darquise says in a loud tone “And do you guys need two extra guns,”
And again both of them say “YES,”
Darquise says “I need you to rob a guy who stole 10 pounds of coke and he has a lot of guns laying around and you can easily steal two of his AK-47’s but remember this guy has lots of security guards so I’m going to give both of you guys a M27 IAR we stole them from the germans but you guys don’t get to keep the guns. This is the plan we leave in one hour I am going to drop you off at the house you guys are gonna climb the back fence. Then you guys are going to sneak up on two of his security guards and knock him out then inject him with this chemical that puts them to sleep for 48 hours. Next you guys are going to pick his lock and sneak into the house remember to be silent. Then you guys are going to find all his Coke and take 50 pounds of coke each and leave. Lastly, if you guys want take a gun for both of you and some ammo and get out. There will be a car waiting for you on the other side of the fence with a get away car. And also don’t worry no one will be home they went on vacation. Also, if you have to use the guns, use the guns I gave you and lastly I will pay you guys $1,000 each.”
Christian and Tant say “GREAT,” at the same time.
Darquise knows what they are planning so he says “Need a little extra cash,”
Then both of the boys together say “YEAH,”
Darquise says in a loud tone “And do you guys need two extra guns,”
And again both of them say “YES,”
Darquise says “I need you to rob a guy who stole 10 pounds of coke and he has a lot of guns laying around and you can easily steal two of his AK-47’s but remember this guy has lots of security guards so I’m going to give both of you guys a M27 IAR we stole them from the germans but you guys don’t get to keep the guns. This is the plan we leave in one hour I am going to drop you off at the house you guys are gonna climb the back fence. Then you guys are going to sneak up on two of his security guards and knock him out then inject him with this chemical that puts them to sleep for 48 hours. Next you guys are going to pick his lock and sneak into the house remember to be silent. Then you guys are going to find all his Coke and take 50 pounds of coke each and leave. Lastly, if you guys want take a gun for both of you and some ammo and get out. There will be a car waiting for you on the other side of the fence with a get away car. And also don’t worry no one will be home they went on vacation. Also, if you have to use the guns, use the guns I gave you and lastly I will pay you guys $1,000 each.”
Christian and Tant say “GREAT,” at the same time.
So Christian and Tant start gearing up for this mission. They are geared up and now get into the car. Christian and Tant get out of the car and jump the fence when the security guards aren’t looking they knock them with their guns and inject them. Christian starts picking the lock while Tant is on look out he sees a security guard. Tant takes out his gun sneaks up on him and knocks him out and injects him with the chemical too. Christian finally picks the look after 20 tries. They go into the house and see many guns and many expensive stuff. The kids find the Coke and take 50 pounds each. They are about to leave but then they see many diamonds and rings and stuff. They go over and take some diamond ring, diamond necklaces, and other jewelry. Christian sees a giant diamond sees a giant diamond and he shows Tant.
Christian is about to take it but Tant stops him and says “Stop if you take that it would probably set off an alarm we better not.”
Christian say “true and lets get out of here I’m scared.”
So Christian and Tant leave and realize the people they injected were gone so they quickly jumped the fence and get into the get away car. They drove back to where their mission ends and they give the coke to Darquise.
Then Darquise said “ Wow nice job guys first time mission success,” and Darquise pays them $1,000 each.
Then Christian said "and last mission I was scared out of my mind I had to hit the guy twice to knock out the security guard."
Lastly, Darquise says “Hope you guys make it to the USA you guys are great kids and he tells them where they can sell the diamond stuff and where to hitchhike a car to Pakistan and where to steal a boat.”
Christian is about to take it but Tant stops him and says “Stop if you take that it would probably set off an alarm we better not.”
Christian say “true and lets get out of here I’m scared.”
So Christian and Tant leave and realize the people they injected were gone so they quickly jumped the fence and get into the get away car. They drove back to where their mission ends and they give the coke to Darquise.
Then Darquise said “ Wow nice job guys first time mission success,” and Darquise pays them $1,000 each.
Then Christian said "and last mission I was scared out of my mind I had to hit the guy twice to knock out the security guard."
Lastly, Darquise says “Hope you guys make it to the USA you guys are great kids and he tells them where they can sell the diamond stuff and where to hitchhike a car to Pakistan and where to steal a boat.”
Then the two boys leave. The boys follow Darquises advice, so they start walking to Pakistan and when ever a car passes they try to hitch hike. But, no one seems to notice them.
The two boys were getting bored and tired from walking so Tant says “We are still 300 miles from a town and we don’t have a car or being hitchhiked we have to get a car.”
So then Christian say “Lets steal one.”
Tant then says “great idea,” and they see a car.
So Tant and Christian go in to the road and tell them to get out of the car or else they will shoot them so the couple gets out. Christian takes the wheel and Tant goes in the passenger seat. Christian slams on the pedal and starts going insanely fast. Then he turns on the radio and starts to sing to the song. Next, Tant falls asleep and Christian drives for another 150 miles. Finally, Christian hits the break because he see somewhere to eat so he pulls into the Burger King and Tant wakes up and they sit down and eat. Then when they are finished they get back on the road. But, this time Tant takes the wheel and Christian falls asleep right away. Tant is a bit scared because there are lots of people on the road with guns and want to hitch hike. So Tant thinks they are going to do what they did and steal the car, then someone jumps in front of the car and Tant accidentally hits him. But he was too scared to stop so he keeps driving. Finally they get to the coast of pakistan after 2 days driving. They stopped and slept in a motel and took a shower.
The two boys were getting bored and tired from walking so Tant says “We are still 300 miles from a town and we don’t have a car or being hitchhiked we have to get a car.”
So then Christian say “Lets steal one.”
Tant then says “great idea,” and they see a car.
So Tant and Christian go in to the road and tell them to get out of the car or else they will shoot them so the couple gets out. Christian takes the wheel and Tant goes in the passenger seat. Christian slams on the pedal and starts going insanely fast. Then he turns on the radio and starts to sing to the song. Next, Tant falls asleep and Christian drives for another 150 miles. Finally, Christian hits the break because he see somewhere to eat so he pulls into the Burger King and Tant wakes up and they sit down and eat. Then when they are finished they get back on the road. But, this time Tant takes the wheel and Christian falls asleep right away. Tant is a bit scared because there are lots of people on the road with guns and want to hitch hike. So Tant thinks they are going to do what they did and steal the car, then someone jumps in front of the car and Tant accidentally hits him. But he was too scared to stop so he keeps driving. Finally they get to the coast of pakistan after 2 days driving. They stopped and slept in a motel and took a shower.
Now is the time to look for the harbor Darquise told them about. They eventually found it after 20 minutes and they saw lots of ships. Darquise told them to go to this guy named Gandy. Gandy knew lots of kids who wanted to go to the U.S.A. and they would help each other get to America. So they find the guy on the harbor with many kids.
Gary and the kids were just about to steal a cargo carrier and go to America but Christian and Tant say “We want in I got $2,000 right here”
Gary says “only $1,000 for both of you” so the two boys get in the Van and Gary takes them to a cliff with a Jump that lands in a little boat that will help them steal a ship. So Gary goes of the gump and they land on the boat. The boat start going super fast and once 500 miles off shore they board a cargo ship and raid it. Gary and his kid not any of the kids kill all the men on board. So Gary takes the wheel and tells everyone to get settled. So Christian and Tant find a bunk bed and settle down.
After 60 days on the boat fishing, throwing up, sleeping, playing cards, playing soccer and practice shooting. They finally see South Africa. The person steering the ship pulled into a very ghetto harbor. Everyone gets off the boat and they get into a few different cars. They start on a dirt road and eventually get to a real road. After 1 hour the car stops in Cape Town. They go to a motel and settle in. Then Christian and Tant go off into town. They each wanted to buy one thing a bracelet made by a African. They want it so they remember their journey for ever. Finally they find a place with the perfect bracelet, it was green, 2 stripes of red, blue dots, and it was made from magazines.
So they ask how much and the girl says “10 for each,” in swati.
Christian has no clue what she said and Christian just gives her $20.
The girl says “Thank you very much,” in swati again.
So it was getting late so Christian and Tant head back to the motel and go to sleep.
The next morning Tant wakes up and says “WAKE UP YOU BIG LAZY BONE WE HAVE TO GO!!!!”
So Christian and Tant get ready to go. All the boys get into the car and ride back to the harbor. They get out of the car and get on the fuel Gary pays the guys for the gas and holding the ship there for the night. So all the boys get onto the boat.
So everyone goes to their room and get settled in because little did they know there was a giant storm ahead of their journey.
Gary and the kids were just about to steal a cargo carrier and go to America but Christian and Tant say “We want in I got $2,000 right here”
Gary says “only $1,000 for both of you” so the two boys get in the Van and Gary takes them to a cliff with a Jump that lands in a little boat that will help them steal a ship. So Gary goes of the gump and they land on the boat. The boat start going super fast and once 500 miles off shore they board a cargo ship and raid it. Gary and his kid not any of the kids kill all the men on board. So Gary takes the wheel and tells everyone to get settled. So Christian and Tant find a bunk bed and settle down.
After 60 days on the boat fishing, throwing up, sleeping, playing cards, playing soccer and practice shooting. They finally see South Africa. The person steering the ship pulled into a very ghetto harbor. Everyone gets off the boat and they get into a few different cars. They start on a dirt road and eventually get to a real road. After 1 hour the car stops in Cape Town. They go to a motel and settle in. Then Christian and Tant go off into town. They each wanted to buy one thing a bracelet made by a African. They want it so they remember their journey for ever. Finally they find a place with the perfect bracelet, it was green, 2 stripes of red, blue dots, and it was made from magazines.
So they ask how much and the girl says “10 for each,” in swati.
Christian has no clue what she said and Christian just gives her $20.
The girl says “Thank you very much,” in swati again.
So it was getting late so Christian and Tant head back to the motel and go to sleep.
The next morning Tant wakes up and says “WAKE UP YOU BIG LAZY BONE WE HAVE TO GO!!!!”
So Christian and Tant get ready to go. All the boys get into the car and ride back to the harbor. They get out of the car and get on the fuel Gary pays the guys for the gas and holding the ship there for the night. So all the boys get onto the boat.
So everyone goes to their room and get settled in because little did they know there was a giant storm ahead of their journey.
After 80 days everyone wakes up to screaming, water crashing, and lightning bolts striking. Gary tells everybody to get in a escape raft. So everyone starts getting into a raft and Gary sees a giant wave coming in so he suddenly jumps into the raft and shuts the door. The raft was like a submarine that floated. It had walls and a roof. So Gary takes the wheel of the raft and starts up the engine. He starts heading to where florida was. After 4 days of throwing up, smelling throw up, and not eating much they finally land on the coast of florida. All of the boys get out and realize there are lots of people on the beach and all of the people are staring at them.
Tant and Christian finally make it and they say together “YES! Thank the lord.”
Tant and Christian finally make it and they say together “YES! Thank the lord.”
Next, they here “whir-er whir-er whir-er whir-er whir-er whir-er.”
All the boys pull their guns out and start running. They started hearing gunshots “BANG BANG BANG,” so the boys start shoot.
Then Christian hears “ GAHHH AHHHH OWWWW,” help I need help and he realizes in was Tant. Tant was shot in the lower knee. So while the police and the gang were shooting at eachother christian hijacks a car and pulls Tant into it.
Christian hits the pedal “Veroom screach,” and christian drives all the way from Miami to Hialeah. Then he finally stops at this guys house. Darquise told them to go to this address when they got toHialleah. So they quickly knock and they see this guys named Jacob waiting for them. Apparently Jacob was Darquis's son. Christian quickly brings Tant in and Darquise helps him.
All the boys pull their guns out and start running. They started hearing gunshots “BANG BANG BANG,” so the boys start shoot.
Then Christian hears “ GAHHH AHHHH OWWWW,” help I need help and he realizes in was Tant. Tant was shot in the lower knee. So while the police and the gang were shooting at eachother christian hijacks a car and pulls Tant into it.
Christian hits the pedal “Veroom screach,” and christian drives all the way from Miami to Hialeah. Then he finally stops at this guys house. Darquise told them to go to this address when they got toHialleah. So they quickly knock and they see this guys named Jacob waiting for them. Apparently Jacob was Darquis's son. Christian quickly brings Tant in and Darquise helps him.
After 2 days of staying at Darquis’s sons house Jacob knew hey wanted to be in California and he needs 2 people to start delivering t-shirts. So he gives Christian and Tant plane tickets to LA.
When they reach LA they pay a taxi to take them to this foster home where they hope to get parents, but while they are in foster care Jacob calls them everyday and give them works to do. After 70 days in foster care Darquise comes and decides to adopt them. Darquise also decides he's going to live in LA. So Darquise, Tant, and Christian all live together until Christian becomes 17. The reason why is because he is on the LA Galaxy and he just got a starting spot on the A team. He plays attacking center mid with Landon Donovan's kid. So Christian full fills his dreams. Also Tant does to he owns Apple, Microsoft, Delta, 10 restaurants, one of them is Katsuya, and he owns the LA Galaxy. So they all live happily ever after.
When they reach LA they pay a taxi to take them to this foster home where they hope to get parents, but while they are in foster care Jacob calls them everyday and give them works to do. After 70 days in foster care Darquise comes and decides to adopt them. Darquise also decides he's going to live in LA. So Darquise, Tant, and Christian all live together until Christian becomes 17. The reason why is because he is on the LA Galaxy and he just got a starting spot on the A team. He plays attacking center mid with Landon Donovan's kid. So Christian full fills his dreams. Also Tant does to he owns Apple, Microsoft, Delta, 10 restaurants, one of them is Katsuya, and he owns the LA Galaxy. So they all live happily ever after.
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